An Unknown Girl – analysis points
Free verse → intimate and conversational
Irregular rhyme; half rhyme & internal rhyme
Enjambment → unplanned speech, stream of consciousness
Culture desire & longing
- Henna would disappear; connection is temporary → "outstretched [hands]" →
long to feel close to the culture once more
- the deep desire to experience a clear sense of cultural identity and belonging
Integration of Eastern & Western cultures
- Juxtaposition: "Miss India '' banner, mannequins with "Western perms"
→ symbolises the influence of the Western world on India and its culture;
integration of cultures
→ "Western perms" and Miss America-style beauty competitions: Western
standards have affected Indians' perception of ideal beauty
Symbols
Peacock
- India's national bird, a symbol of the speaker's longing to feel like a part of
culture and her connection to India
Poetic devices
Repetition
- “An unknown girl’’ → trying to remain present in (or recall) this tender moment
of connection with India
- "Peacock" → highlights the importance of this symbolic connection to India.
Metaphor
- “I have new brown veins” → reconnecting with her heritage has filled her with
new life; Indian culture is now flowing in her blood
Simile
- “Soft as a snail trail” → fragility of this memory
- “Clinging to these firm peacock lines like people who cling to the sides of a
train” → desperation; holding on to the memory and the Indian culture it
represents
Personification
- “Dummies…tilt and stare with their Western perms”
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Free verse → intimate and conversational
Irregular rhyme; half rhyme & internal rhyme
Enjambment → unplanned speech, stream of consciousness
Culture desire & longing
- Henna would disappear; connection is temporary → "outstretched [hands]" →
long to feel close to the culture once more
- the deep desire to experience a clear sense of cultural identity and belonging
Integration of Eastern & Western cultures
- Juxtaposition: "Miss India '' banner, mannequins with "Western perms"
→ symbolises the influence of the Western world on India and its culture;
integration of cultures
→ "Western perms" and Miss America-style beauty competitions: Western
standards have affected Indians' perception of ideal beauty
Symbols
Peacock
- India's national bird, a symbol of the speaker's longing to feel like a part of
culture and her connection to India
Poetic devices
Repetition
- “An unknown girl’’ → trying to remain present in (or recall) this tender moment
of connection with India
- "Peacock" → highlights the importance of this symbolic connection to India.
Metaphor
- “I have new brown veins” → reconnecting with her heritage has filled her with
new life; Indian culture is now flowing in her blood
Simile
- “Soft as a snail trail” → fragility of this memory
- “Clinging to these firm peacock lines like people who cling to the sides of a
train” → desperation; holding on to the memory and the Indian culture it
represents
Personification
- “Dummies…tilt and stare with their Western perms”
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