The war of the roses essay example

I've attached this essay to show you how you don't actually need loads of evidence to get a high mark you just need to be specific with your evidence, its all about quality not quantity also the evidence on here is also on my revision sheets and it gives an example on how you can implement them and how if you know certain facts you can apply them to any question. Also hopefully you will be able to see my teacher's comments so you can see where the marks are coming from as its hard to un...