DIE TARENTAAL – Totius
THE GUINEA FOWL – Totius
1 The wheelbarrow's screeching sound
2 he moaned out mournfully
3 while the twilight ring is rapidly descending,
4 the guinea fowl.
5 He seeks—and it is too late—
6 To him a comrade,
7 To live in a tree the loneliness
8 and night to wear.
9 Together, they will be in a shining leaf tree
10 half slaap, half awake, half dream,
11 And at the approach of perdition,
12 alone does not die.
13 I aimed, and with the bang
14 it fell a dead one;
15 the others fly with wild force
16 away in the night!
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TEMAS: dood en sterflikheid, veral hartseer
Boodskap Leser identifiseer met verlies van
wat ervaar word wanneer ‘n lewensmaat
tarentaal wat bly leef > hartseer van
weggeneem word. Die hartseer wat ervaar word
wanneer ’n lewensmaat verlies/dood van ‘n lewensmaat
THEMES: death and mortality, especially weggeneem word.
Reader identifies with loss of guinea fowl
grief experienced when a partner is taken Message
who continues to live > grief of loss/death
away.
The grief experienced when a of a partner
partner is taken away.
“– en dit is ook al laat–” (reël 5)
By watter woord in strofe 1 sluit hierdie woorde aan? “skeemring”
Waarom word hierdie woorde tussen aandagstrepe geskryf? Dit
beklemtoon die desperaatheid van die tarentaal om ’n maat te kry.
Hy hoop hulle sal saam slaap, waak en droom.
Hy hoop hy sal nie alleen sterf nie.
He hopes they will sleep, watch and dream together.
He hopes he won't die alone.
Die digter gebruik assonansie
om die hartseer stemming in hierdie gedig te behou. Die woord “gemik” in
reël 13 wys daarop dat die jagter bedoel het omdie tarentaal te skiet. Die
ander tarentale het weggevlieg omdat hulle bang was
“knal” = klanknabootsing
Impliseer dat die jagter ’n skoot afgevuur het
The poet uses assonance
to maintain the sad mood in this poem. The word "aimed" in line 13 indicates
knal" = Sound imitation that the hunter intended to shoot the guinea fowl. The other guinea fowl flew
Implies that the hunter fired a shot away because they were scared
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