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40/40 AQA English Creative Writing Model Answer

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This is a model answer for AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, Question 5, awarded a full 40/40 by an official examiner. It showcases the ideal structure, language choices, and crafting techniques needed to achieve top marks in the creative writing section of the exam. Whether you're aiming to improve your writing style or understand what a perfect response looks like, this piece provides a clear example to learn from. The first page offers a preview of the story so you can see the quality for yourself. Follow this writer’s technique, and you’ll be well on your way to securing a Grade 9-worthy answer.

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Question: Write a story about a magical world



Tweet, tweet. A bird’s song tugged me from my sleep. I sighed, rolling
over to reach for my phone. Surely it wasn’t time for work? It felt like only
a breath ago when I had been dragged into slumber by my stress and
chamomile tea. As I felt for my phone, something soft grazed my
fingertips. It was only then that I opened my eyes, and my breath stilled at
the sight.

A year ago, I was gasping for breath as tears clouded my vision. A month
ago, I convinced myself in the mirror that everything was fine, that a job
interview would not define me. Today, I lay in the middle of a forest ,
oblivious to when and how I arrived.

I sprung to my feet, terror rearing its head as my blood froze to ice.
Questions zipped through my head, bullets ricocheting across my skull. I
stood in the centre of a cluster of trees, their leaves shrouding my within
their grasp.

I couldn’t feel my feet. Or my hands.
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