Exemplar essay psychology AQA Describe and Evaluate the Multi-store model of memory (16)

In depth fully written 16 marker on the multi-store model of memory which scored 16/16. How to write a good 16 marker to hit the top marks: - A 16 marker is split into in this case 6 marks for A01 content which is the describing part of the essay and 10 marks goes towards Ao3 evaluation of you arguing for and against the multi-store model of memory. - if you are running short on time goes straight to Ao3 as you awarded marks heavily on it. The structure is POINT EVIDENCE/EXAMPLE ANALYSIS AND LINK also known as PEEAL. If you follow this structure for Ao3 evaluation you will hit top bands. - how many arguments should you have? Well you should always aim for atleast 3 good chuncky paragraphs that are peeal structures but if you are running out of ideas to do peeal try doing 4 arguments. - A grades students usually use research methods to makes links within their Ao3 paragraphs such as is it ethical the study or mode, does is lack validity is it reliable is it too simiplistic complex etc. - for Ao1 do not get carried away it is 6 marks and yes every mark is important but do not overwrite or write things that wouldn’t get marks think of 6 important points you could write and if u have time at the end then add more to make sure you get them marks.