CSM Leiden - Final Assignment Intelligence and Policymaking

In this assignment, I analysed whether the failed strategic goals of Russia in the Russo-Ukraine War make it an intelligence failure. The assignment was graded with an 8.2! To allow you to hone your own assignment, I have included the feedback I received. Feedback: ''Scientific & Conceptual Foundation: The paper effectively utilizes a range of analytical concepts relevant to the course. However, in some cases, a broader array of resources could have been incorporated to provide more comprehensive definitions. While the paper draws on sources from the course syllabus for its theoretical framework, a deeper scientific foundation could have been established by including research from outside the syllabus. Argument Development and Analysis: The paper tackles a challenging and highly original topic, successfully delivering a nuanced analysis. The meticulous attention to outlining the methodology is essential, particularly in this context. The essay demonstrates extensive research, delving into highly pertinent literature from both within and beyond the scope of the course, to address the primary question. Writing Style: The writing style is exceedingly formal and clear, ideally suited for academic papers. Notably, there are no spelling errors, reflecting a job well done. However, the page breaks can be slightly distracting and disrupt the flow at times. Referencing: Referencing is nearly flawless, with just one instance of an APA 6-style web reference that includes "Retrieved."