Chronology story mountain:
Story ideas:
● Quarrel / dispute / conflict
● Betrayal of a friend as the main character discovers his involvement with a dangerous
gangster & the subsequent emotional turmoil it causes. [highlight the element of trust,
●
●
isabelle
betrayal & the characters’ reactions to the betrayal]
Trapped in a confined space - restriction of movement
Extreme emotions: shock, paranoia, dread → intense internal thoughts
Random sentences:
- The weight of the responsibility felt like an immense, crushing force, pressing down upon
my shoulders with the force of eight thousand pounds.
- Children have become cogs in a box-ticking machine. (trapped)
- The shimmering ruby red skies at dawn were a breathtaking sight to behold.
- Climbers either fear or loathe it, but all of them respect anyone who has the ability to
negotiate its incredibly difficult layout.
- Everyone calls him ‘a gentle giant’. The name seems to capture a lot of his other
qualities too. With his wide-set brown eyes, prominent and slightly battered-looking nose,
tumbling mane and barrel chest, he could be the original Tarzan come back to life: a
brooding inhabitant of the wild who is occasionally roused to fantastic bouts of action
and daring stunts.
- A gasp tore from his throat as Druig shot upright in his bed. Chest heaving and sweat
soaking his body, he felt his eyes wildly taking in his surroundings.
- Kaz’s bitter coffee eyes remained trained on the horizon, the rising sun painting him in
pale gold light.
Story ideas:
● Quarrel / dispute / conflict
● Betrayal of a friend as the main character discovers his involvement with a dangerous
gangster & the subsequent emotional turmoil it causes. [highlight the element of trust,
●
●
isabelle
betrayal & the characters’ reactions to the betrayal]
Trapped in a confined space - restriction of movement
Extreme emotions: shock, paranoia, dread → intense internal thoughts
Random sentences:
- The weight of the responsibility felt like an immense, crushing force, pressing down upon
my shoulders with the force of eight thousand pounds.
- Children have become cogs in a box-ticking machine. (trapped)
- The shimmering ruby red skies at dawn were a breathtaking sight to behold.
- Climbers either fear or loathe it, but all of them respect anyone who has the ability to
negotiate its incredibly difficult layout.
- Everyone calls him ‘a gentle giant’. The name seems to capture a lot of his other
qualities too. With his wide-set brown eyes, prominent and slightly battered-looking nose,
tumbling mane and barrel chest, he could be the original Tarzan come back to life: a
brooding inhabitant of the wild who is occasionally roused to fantastic bouts of action
and daring stunts.
- A gasp tore from his throat as Druig shot upright in his bed. Chest heaving and sweat
soaking his body, he felt his eyes wildly taking in his surroundings.
- Kaz’s bitter coffee eyes remained trained on the horizon, the rising sun painting him in
pale gold light.
