Gatsby and Poetry analysis

I’m pretty proud of this essay, i got 21/25 marks however i would just be clear about this, don’t talk about the characters as people that’s one thing i so so remember to say ‘the author presents’. The question is ‘lovers come into conflict with the conventions of society’ I decided to look at the Garden of love and Who so list to hunt as i thought both personas presented a struggle against society with unrequited love or class difference and of course Gatsby has both.