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Essay at GCSE English Literature, written for AQA specification but useful for any exam board. Comprehensive essay response written to the question "How does Shakespeare present the importance of honour and male pride in Romeo and Juliet?" using an extract from Act 3, Scene 1. Attained an A* (grade8/9). Use as inspiration and guidance for writing own essays or build your own response to the question.

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How does Shakespeare present the importance of honour and male pride in Romeo
and Juliet? (3,1)

In “Romeo and Juliet” Shakespeare presents honour and male pride as destructive
social forces that perpetuate violence, suppress emotional vulnerability and allow the
destructive cycle of inherited hatred to continue, which ultimately contributes to the
lover’s fate. Through impulsive duels, masculine expectations, and the obsession to
defend reputation, Shakespeare arguably critiques a patriarchal society where
personal pride outweighs reason and love. This exploration exposes the futility of
honour, when driven by ego not morality, leads to irreversible tragedy.



Shakespeare identifies how male characters link honour to their masculinity, perhaps
to critique the toxic values of an Elizabethan Patriarchy as the male characters’ lives
pay the forfeit. From the beginning of the play, in the prologue, Shakespeare outlines
the course of events as there is an ‘Ancient grudge’ that is causes ‘civil blood [to]
make civil hands unclean’. It could be argued that Shakespeare is telling the audience
what is happening because they are already aware, as even in Elizabethan society the
story was known since it was originally written by an Italian author. Although, one
could argue that Shakespeare tactically introduces us to the ‘ancient grudge’ to urge
the audience to reflect on the ambiguity of this ‘grudge’ that causes the lovers to
‘take their life’. By already relieving some tension, Shakespeare fosters further
examination of the motives and potentially the self-destructive cycle of masculine
honour that is inextricably linked to violence.



In Act 3, we witness another fight between the ‘two households’, which may
demonstrate the rigid expectations of masculinity in Verona – Shakespeare shows how
expectations of honour and aggression entrap men into cycles of impulsive violence
that only escalate their own tragic end. The audience are already aware of the
Prince’s warning that another fight will lead to fatal punishment, as well as the fact
this feud was ‘bred of an airy word’. So, when Mercutio provokes Tybalt with ‘make it a
word and a blow’, it could reveal the intense power of simply ‘word[s]’ to escalate into
violence that kills both Tybalt and Mercutio. Furthermore, the fact the feud is ‘bred’
connotes to animalistic traits, as it compares the feuding men to primal animals which
may emphasise the futility of their honour because it is not seen as representing
traditional male honour, but simply an immature excuse to fight. This street brawl
mirrors the earlier fight that was started by the servants. In Act 1 their motive to fight
could be seen as justifiable out of male pride because they are simply demonstrating
their respect and protecting their household. However, it could also be seen to further
promote Shakespeare’s critique of a society obsessed with men performing acts of
honour that only cause chaos. By including another fight scene in Act 3, potentially
Shakespeare is solidifying the fragility of a society that rewards toxic masculinity and
inherited hatred that excuses unnecessary death as acts of male pride and honour.



While proving how values of honour escalate violence, Shakespeare ironically reveals
how a lack of honour can also cause outburst of aggression; perhaps to criticise that in

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William Shakespeare, William Shakespeare, William Shakespeare Oxford School Shakespeare: Romeo and Juliet
Publisher: 01 januari 2008 ISBN: 9780198321668 Edition: 8000

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