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Prepare for your GCSE English Literature exam with this Grade 9 model essay for AQA An Inspector Calls, answering the question: "How far does Priestley present society as unfair in An Inspector Calls?" This resource demonstrates the standard of analysis, structure, and evaluation expected in a top-band response, making it an excellent revision tool for students aiming for grades 7 to 9. The document includes the original exam question, the mark awarded by a verified Head of English Department, and the full model essay typed out for clear and easy reading. It is ideal for understanding how to construct a high-level literature essay, develop perceptive analysis, and effectively embed quotations while meeting the AQA assessment objectives. This resource includes: • The original AQA-style essay question. • A complete Grade 9 model response. • The mark awarded by a verified Head of English Department. • A professionally typed version of the essay for easy reading and revision. • An excellent example of high-level analysis, essay structure, and use of textual evidence. • A useful reference for improving exam technique and achieving top marks in GCSE English Literature. Ideal for Year 10 and Year 11 GCSE students, tutors, teachers, and anyone preparing for the AQA GCSE English Literature exam. Whether you're revising for mock exams or your final GCSEs, this model essay provides a clear example of what a high-scoring response looks like and how to write one yourself.

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Priestley, in the didactic play An Inspector Calls, presents the extent of unfairness in society through
the Capitalist and patriarchal norms of the Birling family (who serve as a symbol for the upper class)
and how this causes the eventual suicide of Eva Smith (a symbol of the vulnerable lower-class
women). Priestley wishes to criticise Capitalist and patriarchal values, and condemns the suffering
they cause within society, advocating for Socialism and promoting social responsibility.

Priestley begins by setting a precedent for the extent of unfairness in society through Mr Birling’s
selfishness. He lectures Eric and Gerald by telling them that “A man has to make his own way, has to
look after himself – and his family too”. The notion of making one’s “own way” creates imagery of a
bulldozer trampling past others towards material success and stardom, which already, from the play’s
onset, sets the tone of Mr Birling’s selfish Capitalist beliefs. The fact that Mr Birling pauses before
saying “– and his family too” creates a chink in his façade of honour and nobility, as it is clear he was
so caught up in “himself” and his “own” success that he almost neglected the importance of looking
after one’s “family”, but he proceeds to mention “family” to appease to Eric’s and Gerald’s Christian
values. However, the pause, shown by “–”, exposes Mr Birling’s infatuation in himself and his material
success, so really the rule of 3 in the list is ironic, as his “family” is not placed on the same level of
significance as his material success. Priestley warns his contemporary audience of the dangers of
Capitalism through Mr Birling’s selfishness: if Mr Birling (a construct for the greedy Capitalist) deems
even his own family insignificant in the face of money and power, then it is clear that he would
completely neglect social responsibility for vulnerable lower- and middle-class citizens. Priestley
does this to present how Capitalism goes against the very Christian norms of “loving thy neighbour”,
as Mr Birling’s selfishness juxtaposes the notion of community and familyhood – indeed, he regards
community as “nonsense”. Thus, Priestley presents society as extremely unfair through Mr Birling’s
(and the upper class’s) unfairness towards the working class.

Moreover, Priestley uses the horrific death of Eva Smith to emphasise the cruelty with which she was
treated. This is clear when Eva Smith is said to have committed suicide by drinking “disinfectant”. The
visceral imagery created by this manner of suicide would displease Priestley’s contemporary
audience, for whom suicide was considered a sin against God. Hence, it seems as though Priestley is
presenting Eva Smith as sacrilegious for killing herself. Indeed, this is how many people in society may
have viewed those who committed suicide. However, the fact that Eva uses “disinfectant” symbolises
an attempt to cleanse herself and her soul from the evil of the world – unfortunately, Eva is only able to

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