Biology Personal Statement
Example:
Since as long ago as I can remember I have always been fascinated by the natural world. That
childish fascination has not left me but deepened over the years. This interest has led me to my love
of biology, ecology, animal behaviour and evolution.
Following my graduation from High School I studied Biological Sciences for two years at the Catholic
University of Chile in Santiago. From March 1997 to November 1998, I was obliged to take a break
from my studies at university as my father was moving from the city to a more remote rural area.
While helping my father I was able to work closely with birds of prey among others and I was
successful in breeding the endangered chinchillas. During my time away from university I continued to
deepen my knowledge of my subject and studied evolutionary thinking and the biological basis of
behaviour.
I also worked for a brief time as a translator which made me think that perhaps my English was good
enough to complete my studies in an English-speaking country.
Since coming to Oxford and studying at OLT I have improved my written English a great deal. I am a
member of The Natural History Museum (London) and recently attended a course called 'The History
of Evolution'. The course was organised by Birkbeck College and took place at the Natural History
museum in London each Wednesday.
The course has been fascinating and has served to confirm my suspicion that the more I learn of this
subject the more I want to know.
I am hopeful that my previous studies in Santiago, my maturity and my experience in this field will
allow me to enter the second year of an undergraduate programme in the UK. After completing my
undergraduate it is my wish to continue studying at postgraduate level and ultimately conduct my own
research in this area.
My other academic interests include, Palaeoanthropology, and the history and development of
science. I am most interested in the writings of Darwin and Thomas and Henry Huxley.
I am keen on fitness training, horse riding, trekking, and diving. I am most interested in all outdoor
pursuits. I am also keen to develop my newly found skills in classical singing and dance.
I realise that as a non-native student I will be required to work harder than my contemporaries and I
am prepared to do that. I have a cheerful and open-minded disposition and look forward to sharing
and exploring new ideas.
I hope may application will be considered favourably.
Example:
Since as long ago as I can remember I have always been fascinated by the natural world. That
childish fascination has not left me but deepened over the years. This interest has led me to my love
of biology, ecology, animal behaviour and evolution.
Following my graduation from High School I studied Biological Sciences for two years at the Catholic
University of Chile in Santiago. From March 1997 to November 1998, I was obliged to take a break
from my studies at university as my father was moving from the city to a more remote rural area.
While helping my father I was able to work closely with birds of prey among others and I was
successful in breeding the endangered chinchillas. During my time away from university I continued to
deepen my knowledge of my subject and studied evolutionary thinking and the biological basis of
behaviour.
I also worked for a brief time as a translator which made me think that perhaps my English was good
enough to complete my studies in an English-speaking country.
Since coming to Oxford and studying at OLT I have improved my written English a great deal. I am a
member of The Natural History Museum (London) and recently attended a course called 'The History
of Evolution'. The course was organised by Birkbeck College and took place at the Natural History
museum in London each Wednesday.
The course has been fascinating and has served to confirm my suspicion that the more I learn of this
subject the more I want to know.
I am hopeful that my previous studies in Santiago, my maturity and my experience in this field will
allow me to enter the second year of an undergraduate programme in the UK. After completing my
undergraduate it is my wish to continue studying at postgraduate level and ultimately conduct my own
research in this area.
My other academic interests include, Palaeoanthropology, and the history and development of
science. I am most interested in the writings of Darwin and Thomas and Henry Huxley.
I am keen on fitness training, horse riding, trekking, and diving. I am most interested in all outdoor
pursuits. I am also keen to develop my newly found skills in classical singing and dance.
I realise that as a non-native student I will be required to work harder than my contemporaries and I
am prepared to do that. I have a cheerful and open-minded disposition and look forward to sharing
and exploring new ideas.
I hope may application will be considered favourably.
