ENG-105: Module 7
Writing Self-Review Assignment
Name:
Commentary Essay Topic: Learning how to Teach a Child with ADHD Commentary Essay
Thesis Statement: Teachers should receive more training on how ADHD affects children, as well
as how to develop effective classroom management strategies and how to help them thrive in the
classroom.
Please write a minimum of 100 words for each of the three questions below, describing the
progress you have made in your writing. Make sure you proofread your self-review before
submitting.
1. What changes or improvements did you make to your commentary essay rough draft?
Identify specific parts of your paper that you revised. Why did you make these changes to
your rough draft? (100 words minimum)
After receiving my peer review feedback and the feedback from my instructor I made some
changes to my commentary essay rough draft.
2. How did a suggested revision from a peer, tutor, or anyone else help strengthen your
paper? If you chose notto incorporate feedback into your essay, explain why. If, for some
reason, you did not receive feedback from someone else, why is feedback from others a
necessary step in the writing process? (100 words minimum)
All suggestions from my peer reviewer and instructor helped to strengthen my paper
significantly. If my paper was already strong and perfect, there would be no need for
suggestions.
3. What progress do you believe you have made as a writer during the course? In what areas
do you still need to grow as a writer? Consider the following areas, created by the
Council of Writing Program Administrators (2008), as you answer this question: (1)
rhetorical knowledge like purpose, tone, and audience, (2) critical thinking, reading, and
writing, (3) writing processes like drafting and revising, (4) knowledge of writing
conventions like grammar and formatting, and (5) composing writing in electronic
environments like the digital classroom or Microsoft Word. (100 words minimum)
I believe that I have made significant progress from where I began prior to taking this course.
Reference
Writing Program Administrators. (2008). WPA outcomes statement for first-year composition.
Retrieved from http://wpacouncil.org/positions/outcomes.html
Writing Self-Review Assignment
Name:
Commentary Essay Topic: Learning how to Teach a Child with ADHD Commentary Essay
Thesis Statement: Teachers should receive more training on how ADHD affects children, as well
as how to develop effective classroom management strategies and how to help them thrive in the
classroom.
Please write a minimum of 100 words for each of the three questions below, describing the
progress you have made in your writing. Make sure you proofread your self-review before
submitting.
1. What changes or improvements did you make to your commentary essay rough draft?
Identify specific parts of your paper that you revised. Why did you make these changes to
your rough draft? (100 words minimum)
After receiving my peer review feedback and the feedback from my instructor I made some
changes to my commentary essay rough draft.
2. How did a suggested revision from a peer, tutor, or anyone else help strengthen your
paper? If you chose notto incorporate feedback into your essay, explain why. If, for some
reason, you did not receive feedback from someone else, why is feedback from others a
necessary step in the writing process? (100 words minimum)
All suggestions from my peer reviewer and instructor helped to strengthen my paper
significantly. If my paper was already strong and perfect, there would be no need for
suggestions.
3. What progress do you believe you have made as a writer during the course? In what areas
do you still need to grow as a writer? Consider the following areas, created by the
Council of Writing Program Administrators (2008), as you answer this question: (1)
rhetorical knowledge like purpose, tone, and audience, (2) critical thinking, reading, and
writing, (3) writing processes like drafting and revising, (4) knowledge of writing
conventions like grammar and formatting, and (5) composing writing in electronic
environments like the digital classroom or Microsoft Word. (100 words minimum)
I believe that I have made significant progress from where I began prior to taking this course.
Reference
Writing Program Administrators. (2008). WPA outcomes statement for first-year composition.
Retrieved from http://wpacouncil.org/positions/outcomes.html
