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Edexcel A-Level Geography 9GE0 – Glaciated Landscapes – Rate of Glacial Movement 8 Marker Model Essay (8/8) + Examiner Guidance

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Full-mark (8/8) model essay for Edexcel A-Level Geography Topic 2A: Glaciated Landscapes and Change, answering "Explain the different factors that influence the rate of glacial movement." Includes an examiner-style guidance box on structure and key terminology (mass balance, pressure melting point, basal sliding). Covers altitude, glacier mass and ice temperature. Written by me for my A-Level in 2024, marked by my teacher and improved to full marks following their feedback and remark. NO AI was used to write this essay.

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Edexcel A-level Geography – Glaciated Landscapes and Change
Explain the different factors that influence the rate of glacial movement. [8 marks]


HOW TO ANSWER THIS QUESTION
This 8-mark 'explain the different factors' question rewards a clear structure covering a range of
factors, each explained fully — plan one paragraph per factor before you write:
• 1. Use the key terminology linked to glacial movement: terms such as mass balance,
accumulation and ablation, pressure melting point, internal deformation and basal sliding
show the examiner precise geographical knowledge — an answer without these reads as
general description and drops out of the top band.
• 2. Give a very clear structure with all the key points included: deal with one factor per
paragraph (e.g. altitude, mass, ice temperature) and explain the full chain from factor to
movement — for example, how warm-based ice at the pressure melting point produces basal
meltwater, which lubricates the bed and enables rapid basal sliding, in contrast to cold-based
polar glaciers frozen to the bedrock. Linking factors together (e.g. altitude driving precipitation,
which adds mass) shows the connected reasoning Edexcel Level 3 (6–8 marks) requires.

Examiner tip: a short conclusion identifying the most significant factor is a nice way to finish, but
the marks come from the depth and connectedness of each factor's explanation.

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