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Edexcel A-Level Geography 9GE0 – Glaciated Landscapes and Change – 20 Mark Model Essay (Full Marks 20/20) – Value of Glaciated Landscapes Globally vs Locally + Examiner Guidance

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Full-mark (20/20) model essay for Edexcel A-Level Geography Topic 2A: Glaciated Landscapes and Change, answering "Evaluate the view that glaciated and periglaciated landscapes have a greater value globally than locally." Includes an examiner-style guidance box explaining how to structure the answer, make synoptic links and use evaluative criteria to reach Level 4. Covers tundra biodiversity, permafrost, HEP and the albedo effect. Written by me for my A-Level sat in 2024, marked by my teacher and improved to full marks following their feedback and remark. NO AI was used to write this essay.

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Edexcel A-level Geography – Glaciated Landscapes and Change
Evaluate the view that glaciated and periglaciated landscapes have a greater value globally
than locally. [20 marks]


HOW TO ANSWER THIS QUESTION
This 20-mark 'evaluate' question is marked on the quality of your argument as much as your
knowledge — take a clear position in the introduction and sustain it throughout:
• 1. Make deeper synoptic links: the strongest points reach beyond the landscape itself into
wider Earth systems — for example, permafrost as a cryospheric carbon store whose
degradation disrupts the whole carbon cycle, or ice cover driving a positive feedback loop
through the albedo effect. Synoptic connections like these are what Edexcel Level 4 (16–20
marks) demands.
• 2. Use explicit evaluative criteria: don't just assert that one value is more important — judge
the view against stated criteria, such as spatial scale (local values are restricted to specific
areas while climate regulation affects all life on Earth). A criteria-based judgement, signposted
in the introduction and returned to in the conclusion, is what turns description into evaluation.
Examiner tip: the balance still matters — credit both sides (local biodiversity, regional HEP, cultural
value for indigenous communities) before weighing them, or the evaluation looks one-sided.

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