CALIFORNIA POST EXAM STUDY
GUIDE(PELLETB). PART 1 (CLARITY)
CORRECT 100%
A. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial she felt she received justice
B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received justice.
- ANSWERB. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she
received justice.(answer a is a run on sentence)
A. Marge told Ruth Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.
B. Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with her. - ANSWERA.
Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.( answer b
contains a vague reference. The sentence is unclear)
A. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her car as
she made the right turn.
B. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her car. As
she made the right turn.. - ANSWERA. (b contains a sentence fragment)
A. Officers who train rarely are caught off guard.
B. Officers who train are rarely caught off guard. - ANSWERB. (a contains a
misplace modifier & is unclear)
A. The defendant was angry at the sentence he received. He antagonized the judge
out of frustration.
B. the defendant was angry at the sentence he received he antagonized the judge of
frustration. - ANSWERA..(b is a run on sentence)
A. Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies and community
priorities tend to be more successful than those who do not, unless they are
assigned to special covert details that have little contact with ordinary citizens
B.Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies, and community
priorities tend to special covert details that have little contract with ordinary citizens. -
ANSWERA. ( b contains a sentence fragment)
A. Jake and Ronald were playing cards when Ronald shot Jake. In the leg.
B. Jake and Ronald were playing cards when Ronald shot Jake in the leg
++ - ANSWERB. (a contains a sentence fragment)
GUIDE(PELLETB). PART 1 (CLARITY)
CORRECT 100%
A. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial she felt she received justice
B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received justice.
- ANSWERB. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she
received justice.(answer a is a run on sentence)
A. Marge told Ruth Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.
B. Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with her. - ANSWERA.
Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.( answer b
contains a vague reference. The sentence is unclear)
A. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her car as
she made the right turn.
B. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her car. As
she made the right turn.. - ANSWERA. (b contains a sentence fragment)
A. Officers who train rarely are caught off guard.
B. Officers who train are rarely caught off guard. - ANSWERB. (a contains a
misplace modifier & is unclear)
A. The defendant was angry at the sentence he received. He antagonized the judge
out of frustration.
B. the defendant was angry at the sentence he received he antagonized the judge of
frustration. - ANSWERA..(b is a run on sentence)
A. Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies and community
priorities tend to be more successful than those who do not, unless they are
assigned to special covert details that have little contact with ordinary citizens
B.Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies, and community
priorities tend to special covert details that have little contract with ordinary citizens. -
ANSWERA. ( b contains a sentence fragment)
A. Jake and Ronald were playing cards when Ronald shot Jake. In the leg.
B. Jake and Ronald were playing cards when Ronald shot Jake in the leg
++ - ANSWERB. (a contains a sentence fragment)
