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Question 1
Read the draft memorandum below, which contains some deliberate
errors, and improve it by revising, editing, and proofreading it. This
means that you should write an improved final version of the
memorandum which will be sent to the staff.
Draft Memorandum
From: Management
To: All Community Members
Date: May 7, 2022
Subject: Road Repair Update
Dear Community Members,
We have heard your concerns regarding the poor state of the R30 highway in
Bodikela municipality. We understand that the current condition of the road has
led to an increase in road accidents and tragic loss of lives. Our condolences go
out to the families who have lost their loved ones, and we offer words of
comfort to those who have been injured or emotionally affected by these
accidents.
Please be assured that the relevant authorities within the municipality have
been working tirelessly to address these issues. We are actively assisting all
relevant claims and will continue to do so for the benefit of the community. Our
Question 1
Read the draft memorandum below, which contains some deliberate
errors, and improve it by revising, editing, and proofreading it. This
means that you should write an improved final version of the
memorandum which will be sent to the staff.
Draft Memorandum
From: Management
To: All Community Members
Date: May 7, 2022
Subject: Road Repair Update
Dear Community Members,
We have heard your concerns regarding the poor state of the R30 highway in
Bodikela municipality. We understand that the current condition of the road has
led to an increase in road accidents and tragic loss of lives. Our condolences go
out to the families who have lost their loved ones, and we offer words of
comfort to those who have been injured or emotionally affected by these
accidents.
Please be assured that the relevant authorities within the municipality have
been working tirelessly to address these issues. We are actively assisting all
relevant claims and will continue to do so for the benefit of the community. Our
