GEM A Part II Sentence Editing ACTUAL
QUESTIONS AND CORRECT ANSWERS
We need to send the first package overnight delivery to Florida and the second package needs to
be shipped UPS ground to Arizona. - CORRECT ANSWERS We need to send the first
package overnight delivery to Florida, and the second package needs to be shipped UPS ground
to Arizona.
Please send the overnight package to Carol Miller, Director, Martimer's Advertising, 2900 W.
Pine Avenue, Orlando FL 30043. - CORRECT ANSWERS Please send the overnight
package to Carol Miller, Director, Martimer's Advertising, 2900 W. Pine Avenue, Orlando, FL
30043.
This is Carols work address. - CORRECT ANSWERS This is Carol's work address.
She has been at this location for the past 8 years. - CORRECT ANSWERS She has been at
this location for the past eight years.
Since Carol started with this company she has been promoted twice. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Since Carol started with this company, she has been promoted twice.
Her firm has a well documented policy for promotions and raises. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Her firm has a well-documented policy for promotions and raises.
Getting employees to read the policies is easy, it is difficult to get the employees to understand
the policies. - CORRECT ANSWERS Getting employees to read the policies is easy; it is
difficult to get the employees to understand the policies.
Carol told me her company has good policies on: family leave, paid-time off, and tuition
reimbursement. - CORRECT ANSWERS Carol told me her company has good policies on
family leave, paid-time off, and tuition reimbursement.
, As expected new employees are very interested in reading these policies. - CORRECT
ANSWERS As expected, new employees are very interested in reading these policies.
The company has a weekly informational meeting on Friday at 7:30 AM. - CORRECT
ANSWERS The company has a weekly informational meeting on Friday at 7:30 a.m.
During these meetings employees can ask questions about policies, or about the company in
general. - CORRECT ANSWERS During these meetings employees can ask questions
about policies or about the company in general.
The owner of the company says that "he enjoys the creative side of the business over the
administrative side of the business." - CORRECT ANSWERS The owner of the company
says that he enjoys the creative side of the business over the administrative side of the business.
Carol directing some of the major projects is appreciated by him. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Carol's directing some of the major projects is appreciated by him.
Last year Carol handled over one million dollars worth of ad campaigns. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Last year Carol handled over $1 million worth of ad campaigns.
Carol and Patrick who recently earned his MBA in marketing will be traveling next week to visit
clients. - CORRECT ANSWERS Carol and Patrick, who recently earned his MBA in
marketing, will be traveling next week to visit clients.
They will spend several days in the northeast, and then they will go to Texas. - CORRECT
ANSWERS They will spend several days in the Northeast, and then they will go to Texas.
The personnel department at Martimer's handles all of the travel arrangements. - CORRECT
ANSWERS The Personnel Department at Martimer's handles all of the travel
arrangements.
QUESTIONS AND CORRECT ANSWERS
We need to send the first package overnight delivery to Florida and the second package needs to
be shipped UPS ground to Arizona. - CORRECT ANSWERS We need to send the first
package overnight delivery to Florida, and the second package needs to be shipped UPS ground
to Arizona.
Please send the overnight package to Carol Miller, Director, Martimer's Advertising, 2900 W.
Pine Avenue, Orlando FL 30043. - CORRECT ANSWERS Please send the overnight
package to Carol Miller, Director, Martimer's Advertising, 2900 W. Pine Avenue, Orlando, FL
30043.
This is Carols work address. - CORRECT ANSWERS This is Carol's work address.
She has been at this location for the past 8 years. - CORRECT ANSWERS She has been at
this location for the past eight years.
Since Carol started with this company she has been promoted twice. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Since Carol started with this company, she has been promoted twice.
Her firm has a well documented policy for promotions and raises. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Her firm has a well-documented policy for promotions and raises.
Getting employees to read the policies is easy, it is difficult to get the employees to understand
the policies. - CORRECT ANSWERS Getting employees to read the policies is easy; it is
difficult to get the employees to understand the policies.
Carol told me her company has good policies on: family leave, paid-time off, and tuition
reimbursement. - CORRECT ANSWERS Carol told me her company has good policies on
family leave, paid-time off, and tuition reimbursement.
, As expected new employees are very interested in reading these policies. - CORRECT
ANSWERS As expected, new employees are very interested in reading these policies.
The company has a weekly informational meeting on Friday at 7:30 AM. - CORRECT
ANSWERS The company has a weekly informational meeting on Friday at 7:30 a.m.
During these meetings employees can ask questions about policies, or about the company in
general. - CORRECT ANSWERS During these meetings employees can ask questions
about policies or about the company in general.
The owner of the company says that "he enjoys the creative side of the business over the
administrative side of the business." - CORRECT ANSWERS The owner of the company
says that he enjoys the creative side of the business over the administrative side of the business.
Carol directing some of the major projects is appreciated by him. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Carol's directing some of the major projects is appreciated by him.
Last year Carol handled over one million dollars worth of ad campaigns. - CORRECT
ANSWERS Last year Carol handled over $1 million worth of ad campaigns.
Carol and Patrick who recently earned his MBA in marketing will be traveling next week to visit
clients. - CORRECT ANSWERS Carol and Patrick, who recently earned his MBA in
marketing, will be traveling next week to visit clients.
They will spend several days in the northeast, and then they will go to Texas. - CORRECT
ANSWERS They will spend several days in the Northeast, and then they will go to Texas.
The personnel department at Martimer's handles all of the travel arrangements. - CORRECT
ANSWERS The Personnel Department at Martimer's handles all of the travel
arrangements.
