California post exam study guide(PELLETB). Part 1 (Clarity)
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1. A. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial she felt she received
justice
B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received
justice.: B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received justice.(answer a is a run on
sentence)
2. A. Marge told Ruth Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.
B. Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with her.: A. Marge
told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.( answer b contains a vague reference. The sentence is
unclear)
3. A. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her
car as she made the right turn.
B. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her
car. As she made the right turn..: A. (b contains a sentence fragment)
4. A. Officers who train rarely are caught off guard.
B. Officers who train are rarely caught off guard.: B. (a contains a misplace modifier & is
unclear)
5. A. The defendant was angry at the sentence he received. He antagonized the
judge out of frustration.
B. the defendant was angry at the sentence he received he antagonized the
judge of frustration.: A..(b is a run on sentence)
6. A. Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies and
community priorities tend to be more successful than those who do not, unless
they are assigned to special covert details that have little contact with ordinary
citizens
B.Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies, and com-
munity priorities tend to special covert details that have little contract with
ordinary citizens.: A. ( b contains a sentence fragment)
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Study online at https://quizlet.com/_hseud9
1. A. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial she felt she received
justice
B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received
justice.: B. Julie was happy to get back to her life after the trial. She felt she received justice.(answer a is a run on
sentence)
2. A. Marge told Ruth Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.
B. Marge told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with her.: A. Marge
told Ruth that Marge's supervisor wanted to speak with Ruth.( answer b contains a vague reference. The sentence is
unclear)
3. A. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her
car as she made the right turn.
B. Kelly did not see the cyclist riding in her blind spot and she hit him with her
car. As she made the right turn..: A. (b contains a sentence fragment)
4. A. Officers who train rarely are caught off guard.
B. Officers who train are rarely caught off guard.: B. (a contains a misplace modifier & is
unclear)
5. A. The defendant was angry at the sentence he received. He antagonized the
judge out of frustration.
B. the defendant was angry at the sentence he received he antagonized the
judge of frustration.: A..(b is a run on sentence)
6. A. Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies and
community priorities tend to be more successful than those who do not, unless
they are assigned to special covert details that have little contact with ordinary
citizens
B.Police officers who keep up to date with changing laws, policies, and com-
munity priorities tend to special covert details that have little contract with
ordinary citizens.: A. ( b contains a sentence fragment)
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